Friday, January 29, 2010

Scenario 2 (Fear/Anger)

I was hiking with my best friend,James when I came across a dilapidated hut. I had passed by this hut many times and it had been abandoned for years. However, today, there seemed to be activity inside and we could hear intermittent cries coming from inside the hut.I could hear children screaming,adult screaming and baby screaming.My friend and I was having goose bumps.We decided to take a look what was inside the hut.We were astonished when we saw people using black magic to revive back dead children.It was a very disgusting process.The black magician saw us.We panic and started to run.Unfortunately the black magicians was faster than us as they have the power to grab us down.Luckily,the police came.They used the stun gun to stun the black magicians.After the whole incident,the police advised us not to go out on our own to this kind of places and never explore what was inside.We had learnt our lesson.

Scenario 1

It was very late at night and you were entering the lift. A mysterious man walked in swiftly after you. He smiled wierdly at you, a somewhat sinister look in his eyes before turning to block the only exit. You suddenly remembered that some residents in the neighbourhood had been robbed recently and the culprit was still at large. As the lift door closed, the man reached inside his pockets and he took out a knife.i screamed for help but it was no use.Coincidentally,my neighbour heard it.He was waiting for me at my 11th floor.The robber tried to run away but it was no use.My neighbour had use his chopper to slice him at the back of his back.The robber was bleeding.We called for the police and the robber was send to the police station.It was such a scary night.

Wednesday, January 27, 2010

Scenario homework 2

As my sports shoes stepped on the many dried leaves aund fallen twigs, it produced a crunching and cracking sounds.It was a fine Saturday afternoon with a windy weather and my best friend,Arthur was hiking through the dense woods.We had prepared for quite spme time for this trip into the woods.It was facinating,the woods,the was mulitude of insects everywhere and some squrrels and other animals there.I had always felt good to observe the natural surrundings once in a while.Just then ,a bolt of lighting flashed across the sky accompanied with a deafening roar of thunder.Then,huge raindrops began falling on my head,I looked up at the looming dark clouds and sighed:Here goes my hiking trip.It was dagrous to stay inthe forest while raining and ae quickened our paces and wanted to seek refuge somewhere.Then,we came across a dilapidated hut in the middle of a clearing.We were suprised and joyous at finding a pklace to rest.It was a very old and dirty and cobwebs and dust covered every inch of the house.WE were not so sure about going in after looking at the house.Out of a sudden,a loud scream pierced our eardrums and more screams and cies of fury came from the house and scared the hell out of us and sent a tingle down my spine.We broke out in cold sweat,part of us wanted to help the the screaming lady yet scared of the man.What should we do?

Scenario homework 1

As the bright full moon loomed ahead of me on the dark midnight sky,i was walking back home with my legs as heavy as iron and droopy eyelids which might close any moment.Because of the bright moon,it cast elongated shadows on the ground and i noticed suddenly that there was another towering shadow behind me .Instantly,all my tiredness was washed away instantly and felt a fever of fear washed over me and my mind raced.Holding back my fear,i quickened my pace and made a beeline for home.Just as i stepped into the lift of my block,i heaved a sigh of relief and jabbed continously on the lift button.When the doors of the lift were almost close,l felt safe.But my relief was to be shortlasted,because,out of the blue, massive pair of hands stopped the lift doors from closing.The man forced the door open and stepped in,his figure struck me instantly and i felt cold sweat broke out of my forehead.He had a cruel face with asinister smirk on his face as he stepped in.As the lift ascended slowly,i prayed that this man would not hurt me.Just then,the man fished into his pocket and my eyes widened,and he brought out a....

Tuesday, January 26, 2010

Scenario Three

Anger fill me as I stared at my new bag . The only difference when I brought it to school and now was that now that was egg yolk on it . 'Who did this!' I hollared at the top of my lungs . Staring at my bag ,I fondly remember how hard I worked to get this bag to and I tried to cool my anger. But all it did was it fueled my anger , making me overwhelm with rage , making me look like a demon .suddenly I felt someone poking me , turning back to see who it was ,it was my best friend John. My eyes were blazing, foam was coming out of my mouth and i was so unstable that I could kill if anyone enrage me anymore . And if looks could kill , John would have withered there and then.John was so frightened that he was lost for words ,but in the end he manged to told me who did it and what he also had done to my pencil box . Hearing that I grew even more mad . Fueled only by my rage , I flew to confront the one who did those terrible deeds

Scenario One

It was very late.I was dragging my heels back home ."CEOs don't have to put up with this ' I thought grumpily as I was using what little strength I had left. Mustering all the strength I had left,I pushed the button of the lift . Almost fallen asleep , I was awaken by the sound of the lift arriving .Having no strength left , I crawled into the lift. Thinking about my nice ,comfy bed awaiting me at home gave me new strength to stand and press the lift button . Suddenly , I saw a loom black figure standing before me which sended chills through my spine .The hair at the back of my hair stood own its ends as he approach me . Through the light of the lift I was in ,I could see that the was a man in his 50s, with broad shoulders . He was clad only in plain white singles and tattered shorts . Most frightened of all was his large dragon tattoo . He smile evily as he came in and his hand reach into his pocket.........

Scenario Homework.

Scenario 1 (Fear)

It was very late, after work. Exhausted, I pushed the button of the lift lazily. The lift door started to close. Suddenly, a man walked in hurriedly. My eyebrows shot up in surprise. I apologised profusely and he smiled at me, a somewhat sinister look in his eyes before turning to block the only exit. Remembering what my past teachers always told me, we should not enter the lift with a stranger. I chewed on my lips and took one short glance at the man. He was looking at me over the reflection. My heart hammered, my mind went wild as I remembered that some residents in the neighbourhood had been robbed recently and the culprit was still at large. The door started to close slowly. I clenched my fists tightly and my palms soon became sweaty. Suddenly, I noticed the man reaching inside his pockets...

Scenario 2 (Fear/Anger)

I was engulfed by darkness when I went hiking with my bestfriend, Kimmy. Fortunately, she brought a torchlight with her and shone it in front as we led our way up the hill. As we were hiking, we heard soft feeble sounds of cries. Cold beads of sweat trickled down my forehead. We walked further up the hill and the volume of the cries rose. Kimmy's hands trembled as she shone her torchlight to the direction of the sound. It came from a dilapidated hut which we pass by whenever we went hiking..

- Silin.

Monday, January 25, 2010

Scenario Homework

Scenario One
I was dead beat when I finally reached the bottom of the block.I alredy knew that I was in major trouble so I did not look at the time.I just quickly made my way to the lift.Just as the door was about to close a tall,muscled man whose arm was covered with a terrifying tatoo of a dragon came in and blocked my one and only exit.He smiled with a somewhat sinister look in his eyes.He reched into his bag and started to draw out something...

Scenario Three
Anger pulsed through my veins when I saw that my newly bought Nike bag had a pen mark on it."Who did this!"I yelled.I worked so hard and sacrificed playing computer games for a full year to get this bag and the first day I get to use it,this happens!Of all the bad things that could happen!As I dug my hands into the bag to find some tissue paper,my hand encountered something slimy.Someone had cracked two eggs in my bag!"Hey!Oh what happened to your bag?!"my friend asked."Um I know you are angry with that alone so what will you say when I tell you that your Billabong pencil case is shredded in the dustbin now?"he continued.I saw nothing but red right then and I was just a fraction of a second away from blowing my top...
Rachel Yee

scenario homework

Scenario 1

The man had a knife scar above his left eye and he seemed to be a ex-convit. I was scared and started to feel sweat at my palms and face. His hand was about to take out a thing and I began panicking....
Scenario 3
I tried to find out who had made this to make me furious. When I turned around, I saw my class bully, Tom, smirking like he did something wrong. I quickly walk to him....

Sunday, January 24, 2010

scenario 2

The sun was shining its rays at our backs as I and my friends hike slowly on a hill. We have walk on this route for a long time before. We always past the same places such as a river, a plantation and a hut, but this time, the hut was a bit different. The door of the hut was opened. The hut has been abandoned for more than 50 years.A deafening silence made us shiver than one of my friend ran into the hut. We actually told him to stay still but he did not. His action made some of us angry and some feared that something to him . Then we heard cries from the hut. The cries sounded like it came from anumber of people. One of my friends fished out his handphone andnotified the police.He also summoned the ambulance incase something happened to them.

scenario 1

.The sky was getting darker as I made my way home after a long day at school and library.Then I heard rustling in the bushes . A cold shiver went down my spine . I quicken my steps as my heart starts racing. Upon entering the lift, a man suddenly entered the lift when the door was closing. Then a thought of fear came out of my mind , he might be the culprit that has been stealing my neighbours wallet. I quickly erase the thoughts to comfort myself in the lift.Then the man reached his hands into his pocket......

Saturday, January 23, 2010

scenario homework

Scenario 1

I walked heavily as I returned from my tuition center.
I longed for a comfy bed to sleep in after my tuition. I rushed into the old and dirty elevator and as I pressed the ‘close’ button, a scruffy-looking teenager rushed in. He said thank you in his hollow voice. His shark-like eyes gave out a sinister look that sent a shiver down my spine. His greasy hands dipped into his pocket, taking out something shining.


Scenario 3

I ran to the school with eyes brimming with joy. My new bag swung around along with the wind as I ran. I can’t wait to show all my classmates my new bag. I got it for my birthday present, although I wished for a laptop. “Ring!” as the school bell rang, I rushed to my classroom. “Wow, it is so stylish!” as all my classmates mumbled around me, staring at my bag. I smiled jauntily, saying, “ I got this as my birthday present!” I had never felt so proud before. After my recess, I went back to the classroom, finding everyone crowding around my seat. I knew that wasn’t a good sight. I frantically squeezed through the crowded and found my bag, with marker inks on it! I was horrified at the sight of my new bag. On the bag someone wrote: Showing off doesn’t do you any good! Seeing this, I knew that it was done by someone in this class. I was enraged, and spasm of irritation crossed my face, as I stormed to the staff room.

Scenario Homework

Scenario 1.
It was nearly midnight and I have finally arrived at the void deck of my flat. Though the lights there were on, I could feel the darkness that encloses me from every corner in the chilly night. Along the way to the lift, I could hear footsteps. As I tried to look back, all I could see is the common void deck with nothing else. It is my imagination; I thought and then quickly increase the speed of my pace. Then it hit me again, it wasn't my imagination, the footsteps were back. I ran with all my might and the footsteps followed. I pressed the button that will lead me to the floor of my house. Out of the sudden, the doors stop closing. It was like someone from outside had stopped it from doing so. As the door opened, I clenched my fists, ready for anything......

Just at that moment, a tall muscular man strolled in, with his hands hidden in the pockets. He had a tattoo on his right arm and wore black tank top and blue Bermudas. He looked like in his twenties. He apologized to stop the lift and gave me a sinister smile which made a chill go down my spine. By then, I was sweating profusely. I swallowed a lump in my throat as I waited for the lift to reach my floor. Just as the lift reached the 5th floor, the man took a knife out of his pocket and charged right at me......

Scenario 2.

It was after recess. My friends and I were walking back to class accompany by the laughter that we were making. As I walked into the classroom, I found that your new Nike bag had a pen mark. I was given this bag as a reward for doing well for PSLE, so who could have done it was really mean. I clenched my fists in anger. As I reached into your bag to look for tissue paper, your hands felt something slimy. Ewww…I thought. It was disgusting. Someone had cracked two eggs in my bag and my books were ruined. Just as I were about to run off to find your form teacher, my best friend , Joe , informed me that my pencil case had been found in the dustbin, cut to shreds. I dash to the dustbin, indeed my pencil case was torn. I was furious, wondering who I offended. As I was standing there thinking, someone called out to me,” So, do you like the eggs I gave you? “. I turned my head around and couldn’t believe who it was……

By Jeremy , 1-1

Scenario homework

Scenario 1

My heart was beating very fast. I could feel it wanting to come out of my chest. I quickened my pace. I rushed into the lift. As the door was about to close, a tall man with broad and muscular shoulders rushed in. He was wearing a black jacket with a pair of dark blue jeans. He looked casual but there was something in him that made me feel insecure. And the bad news was just about to come... he slid his hand into his pocket... I began to feel my stomach in knots. I couldn't do anything but just pray for the last moments...


Scenario 3

I burned the midnight oil just to get this NIKE bag. This NIKE bag is now dirtied..now ugly. The NIKE bag was my present for an excellent result in PSLE. It has only been a week since this bag was MINE. I could feel my blood boiling. It went over my limits. At this moment,for once, i knew how a volcano felt when it was going to explode. There were eggs in my bag. Pen marks scribbled all over my bag... At that time of crisis, my friend just picked the right moment to add another bad news.. my pencil case was found in the dust bin... THREE bad things happened to me in a row, in one day... If I found the person who hated me this much... he or she should be praying really hard to GOD right now...

~~ Siti Nuriffa~~

Scenario 3

My face was steamed than ever, my blood was boiling, my blood pressure was levering higher, my eyebrows twiched and i screamed at the top of my lungs,"WHO HAD DIRTIED MY PRECIOUS NEW NIKE BAG?!" Getting 4A* for my PSLE, my parents decided to buy me my long last dream bag and now it had been dirtied by someone. If i ever find that rascal who dirtied my bag i am going to show him or her about dirtying my bag like there's no tommorow......

Scenario 1

I was rushing for the lift, my heart was beating as fast as a bullet train and....Yes i made it into the lift. I heved a sigh of relief as i made it before the lift closed the door. However, i realised that there was a man wearing puffy black jacket, wearing a pair of sky blue jeans, his eyes stared at me with a menacing look. If looks could kill, i would have wither there and then. Just then, he started to drew out something out of his pocket......I froze. My blood turn into glacier ice, a shivering shock went through my spine and i prayed mentally that i would be fine.......

Scenario Writing Homework.

Scenario 1 (Fear)

"Oh no! It's already eight o'clock!" I shrieked as I took a glance at my watch. Without any hesitation, I hurried into the lift. A thickset man walked in swiftly after me. He smiled a crooked smile at me, with a somewhat sinister look in his threatening eyes before turning to block the only exit. This act by the man aroused my suspicion. Upon recalling that some residents in the neighbourhood had been robbed recently and the culprit was still at large, I eyed the man with numbed horror. As the man pressed the 'door close' button, the lift door shut close. My face tightened as the man reached inside his pockets...


Scenario 3 (Anger)

"Ring, ring, ring!" the piercing sound of the school bell rang as a signal that recess was over. Students rushed back to their classrooms. As I returned from recess, I rushed to my seat. When I wanted to take out the books for the next lesson, I realised that my new Nike bag had a clear and distinct blue pen mark on it. My face hardened. I had taken extra care of the bag as it was a gift from my parents for I had done well for PSLE. As I reached into my bag to search for tissue paper, my hands felt something slimy. Looking inside my bag, someone had cracked two eggs in my bag, leaving the eggshells as an evidence, too. "Oh crap! My books are ruined!" I spoke in ragged bursts. Spasm of irritation crossed my face. As I was about to dash out of the classroom to find my form teacher, my best friend stopped me to inform me that my pencil case had been found in the dustbin, cut into shreds. Upon hearing this, my hands balled into tight fists.

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- Josilyn [7]

Scenario Writing (H0P3L3$$ Writing)

Scenario 1


I was walking home from the public library. I just finished borrowing books from the library. Soon, I reached my HDB lift lobby. I pressed the button for the lift. Soon, the lift reached the first floor and I went in the lift. Just as I was about to press the door close button, a man in a western suit rushed in. He gave me a grin that has a uneasy feeling, a somewhat sinister look before turning to block the only exit. All of the this action made me felt the prescence of evil. I remembered there was some robbing cases that happened recently and the robber is still at large. Then, adrenaline started pumping through my body and I was overwhelmed by the prescence of evil. As the lift door closed, the man reached into his pockets ...



Scenario 2



My friend and i had agreed to go hiking that day. I was very excited and enthusiastic to start the hike as i had a period of time never went for hiking already. We met at the foot of the mountain. We started the hike and we came across the dilapidated hut which we came across everytime. It was dead silent everytime we went pass but today the whole hut was filled with activities. I heard someone shouted very fiercely. It sounded very mad. We also heard someone wailing. We peeked through the window and we saw a man lying on the floor groaning in pain. The person who is mad was holding a knife in his hand. Upon seeing that, the man who was wailing, shivered in fear and we saw his pants started to get wet.

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Scenario 1
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It was a dark and starry night.I was on my way home after receiving a new mp3 player from my teacher.As i was strolling towards the void deck,i could sense another pair of footsteps behind me. The moment i entered the lift,a suspicious looking man dashed into the lift.He shot me a creepy smile as he reached his arm towards the close button of the lift.Upon witnessing that,I recalled cases of residents in this block being robbed and the culprit is still unknown.From then , my heart sank as i stood rooted to the ground.His next move was reaching his hand into his pocket .Shuttered , I knew there was no more escape for me as i closed my eyes , paralysed in complete fear. I started to tremble like a falling winter leaf preparing to lose my newly gotten mp3 player....

Scenario 3
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"Ring" went the deafening recess bell as students made their last minute clearing of plates and ran to their allocated classrooms , quickening their steps. I paced to my classroom and sashayed into the room like a princess being known as the top PSLE student of my class. Unfortunately , the wide smile on my face faded upon looking at a obvious pen mark on my NIKE bag which me teacher rewarded me for my colourful PSLE results. Seething with rage , I reached into my bag to get a tissue paper . Astounded , i felt a slimy , gruesome thing on my bare hands . Some notorious student had cracked two rotten eggs into my bag and my textbooks are stained with eggs! My face was then taut with anger , i clenched my fist and banged onto my table in rage. Wanting to get justice for me , I decided to inform my teacher . Alas, just as i was about to dash of to the staff room , my buddy added that my pencil case is found shredded into pieces in the rubbish bin . Peeved , an adrenal tide went boiling through my blood as i hollered at the top of my lungs , " Who did all these!!!!"



♥~RACHEL CHAN - 2~♥

Scenario Homework :)

Scenario 1 (Fear)

It was 7 minutes after midnight late at night. I had just finished the science project which is going to due the next day with my friend. I walked home, finally reaching the block. I was entering the lift and a man walked in swiftly after me. He smiled at me, a somewhat sinister look in his eyes before turning to block the only exit. I stared at him, trying to recall who he is...I suddenly remembered that some residents in the neighbourhood had been robbed recently and the culprit was still at large. As the lift door closed, the man reached inside his pockets…What is he going to do?! The next minute, his tan hairy arms find their way towards my neck with a shiny thing in his hand. Before I could make out what it was, I had a black-out......


Scenario 3 (Anger)

I returned from recess and found that my new Nike bag had a pen mark. I was given this bag as a reward for doing well for PSLE. As Iyou reached into your bag to look for tissue paper, my hands felt something slimy. "Yucks! What is that?!" Someone had cracked two eggs in my bag and my books were ruined. Just as I was about to run off to find my form teacher, my best friend informed me that my pencil case had been found in the dustbin, cut to shreds. "What?! Who on Earth did that?!" Saying this, I rushed to the dustbin, seeing my favourite pencil case in sherds..." WHOEVER DID THIS IS GOING TO PAY FOR IT!" I screamed my head off, fustrated.

Friday, January 22, 2010

scenario homework

Scenario 1

It was late in the night as the humming of cricket could be vividly heard. I trudged towards the lift and pressed the "up" button. Soon, the lift door opened. I shuffled into the lift with a loud yawn. Just as I was going to press the "close" button, the lift door opened and a man entered the lift. He smiled at me. At the same time, I managed to catch a look of him. He was wearing a black jacket, black shorts and a black cap with bloodshot eyes, hog-nosed nose, and jagged teeth with a deep, hollow scar on his cheeks. A sense of uneasiness overwhelmed me as it aroused me. A sense of familiarity rose in me as I thought hard of the man. Ah! I remembered that there was some residents in the neighbourhood had been robbed recently and the culprit was still at large. Beads of perspiration rolled down my forehead as blood drains from my face. I was expecting to reach home fast and looked at the screen of the lift. My worst fear had just come true. i realised that I had forgotten to press button to my level and the man was standing near the buttons. I have no choice but to do this. I mustered my courage and moved toward him to press it. Starring at him with my widened eyes, he reached into his pocket and fished out something that caught my eye......


Scenario 3

"Ring!!!" the deafening bells echoed in the canteen, signalling that recess is over. Students of all classes strode back to class, reluctant to study for another few hours. As I went back to my seat, I was feeling happy to bring a Nike bag as it was my first time carrying a Nike. I got this Nike bag by getting good results in PSLE, which made my parents happy. As I went to my seat, an unexpected situation happened. There was a black ink pen mark on my bag. That made my mouth crimps in annoyance. I decided to forget the matter and go home to wash it off as I thought that it was me who accidentally drawn on it. Reaching into my bag to get some tissues papers to clean my sweat,I felt something slimy. At that moment, I was fuming with rage. Under the bright lights of my classrooms, I saw two egg yolks floating on top of the slime. I then realised that someone had crack two eggs in my bag, in the section where I put my books. Instantly, I thought hard for the most notorious student in my class. Yes! It is him. Running towards the teacher’s table, someone tapped my shoulders. I turned around and saw my best friend. “I saw your Billabong pencil case in the dustbin. It will hurt your feelings if I tell u. See it by yourself.” My best friend said sadly to me. I ran to the dustbin and found something familiar. It was really my pencil case, cut into shreds. Hot tears of anger rolled down my cheeks as I stormed to the teacher, wanting my revenge. My breath was coming raw in my throat as I clenched my fist and jaws in anger.



























Scenario Homework

Scenario 1 (Fear)
It was late at night and you were entering the lift. A man walked in swiftly after you. He smiled at you, a somewhat sinister look in his eyes before turning to block the only exit. You remembered that some residents in the neighbourhood had been robbed recently and the culprit was still at large. As the lift door closed, the man reached inside his pocket. I was feeling nervous. I was frightened when he took out a knife. Instead of pointing the knife at me, he put in back into his pocket, and took out a handphone.

Scenario 2 (Fear/Anger)
You were hiking with your best friend when you came across a dilapidated hut. You had passed by this hut many times and it had been abandoned for years. However, today, there seemed to be activity inside and you could hear intermittent cries coming from inside the hut. I was scared upon hearing this sound. Instead of being nervous, my friend was irritated. He pulled me to the door of the hut. We slowly opened it, and realised that there was a family, listening to radio inside the hut.

Scenario Homework

Scenario 1 (Fear)
It was in the dead of the night and I was walking home from my nearby grandmother's house. I entered the newly built lift when I reached the lobby. As the lift doors were about to close when I pressed the number '4',a man dressed casually in a white singlet and a black jacket rushed in quickly just before the doors closed. He heaved a soft sigh of relief under his breath. The man smiled at me, showing his yellow teeth. The man had made a sinister look in his beady black eyes before he blocked the one and only exit in the lift. That aroused my suspicion. I suddenly remembered that some of my residents in the neighbourhood had been robbed recently and the culprit was still at large. A few seconds after the lift doors closed, the suspicious looking man dipped his hands into his pockets...


Scenario 3 (Anger)
The catchy melodious tune of the recess bell rang to signal the end of recess. I walked back to my class. Feeling excited about the next lesson, I quickened my pace. I went to my seat and saw an irritating pen mark on my new Nike bag,that was given as an reward for doing well for my PSLE. I was shocked and angered by the pen mark. "Who could have done this?!'' I thought angrily as I dipped my hand into my bag to take a packet of tissue out. As I my hand was in the bag digging out for that packet of tissue paper, I felt something slimy and gruesome. I immediately took my hand put and found out shockingly that it was eggs! Someone had purposely cracked two eggs into my bag! I quickly took out my books but they were all badly ruined and they smelt bad too. My face was as red as a tomato already. I was about to report to my form teacher about this incident when my best friend rushed towards me and told me that my newly bought Billabong pencil case was in the dustbin,cut to shreds! I felt so angry but yet I also felt like crying...

Zhi Yin [6]

Scenario 1 (Fear)

It was a dark and erry night.The silence of the dark night was shattered by the loud ring from the elevator,signaling the arrival of the lift.The cold hard steel creaked as I made my way into the broken down elevator.Suddenly,out of the shadows,a dark figure aprroached and walked towards the elevaor.As he walked in,I could get a view of what he looked like under the dim ligths in the lift.He was a chinese man with a deep scar spreading across his rough face.His eyes were bloodshot with a somewhat disfigured nose.As the lift door began to close,I felt a sudden sense of uneasines as i looked at the stranger.He replied with a menacing grin,relvealing one of his golden tooth.A cold chill went down my spine as thougths of robbery flashed throught my mind.I was completely petrified as i stood there thinking why is the elevator going so slow?That was the longest 5 sec of my life.Out of the blue,he reached his hand into his pocket...............
Scenario 1

It was late at night and I was entering the lift after the late night Christmasn Party held in my friend's house. A man barged in the lift right after me. He smiled at me, that sent a cold shiver down my spine. He had bloodshot eyes which somewhat gave him a sinister look. I felt frightened so I decided to exit the lift but he seemed to be blocking the exit with his mascular arms. Suddenly, I remembered that the neighbourhood had been robbed recently and the culprit was still at large. As the lift door closed, the man reached inside his pockets and pulled out something shiny. My heart was thumping faster and faster every second....




Scenario 2

I was hiking with my best friend when I came across a dilapidated hut. I've passed by this hut many times and it had been abandoned for years. However, today, there seemed to be activity inside and I could hear some shrill screams coming from the hut. There seemed to be a faint voice of a man talking the background. I was curios so I went in to the hut to investigate, but once I stepped into the hut, the last thing I saw was a metal rod hitting me and all of it was forgotten.....

Online scenario Homework

Scenario one
The clock struck midnight. The moon shone brightly in the clear blue sky. The surroundings is so quiet that the silence is deafening. "Mum will kill me for sure! Its way past my curfew!" I exclaimed, biting my fingers. Knowing I might as well face the music now than later, I trudged towards the lift and entered in with half-closed eyes when it came. Just then, a suspicious looking man walked in swiftly after me and smiled, a somewhat sinster look in his eyes before turning to block the one and only exit. Frantically, I searched my mind for any sense of recognition and realised that some residents in the neighbourhood had been robbed recently and the culprit was still at large! Recalling this, I stood rooted to the ground as sweat trickled down my forehead. Will I be next? As the door closed, a glimmer of hope shattered and I stared helplessly as the man reached inside his pockets.


Scenario three
"Who did this!" I stammered with rage. My new Nike bag had a obvious pen mark on it. As my parents gave my that bag as a reward for passing my PSLE with flying colours, I treasured it and treated it with care. The plate of chicken rice I was holding crashing onto the floor as shock regristed in my mind. Heads turned and I fixed everyone around me with a level stare, scouring the crowd for signs of anything suspicious. Seeing none, I gave a sigh of exaperation before reaching into my bag for tissue paper to clean up the mess I have made. "Yuck!" I cried, cringing at the touch. Someone had cracked two eggs into my bag and my books were completely ruined. Feeling grossed out, I took deep breaths before calming down. Lips pursed with fury, I murmered venomously, "Could this day get any worst?" As soon as the words left my mouth, my best friend informed me about my pencil case, that was now in the dustbin, cut to shreds. I closed my eyes and willed this to be a dream...but it was not. "Whoever who did all these will pay." I vowed solemly, clenching my fists.

P.s: I admit that I do not write well but I hope you like what I've written and that I did not make too many errors! :)
(I do not suppose I can put a smiley face in my homework so I guess I can put one there.)

Scenario Homework.

Scenario1

It was late at night and I was entering the lift after the last minute project work which was due in 2days. A man in black walked in swiftly after me. He gave me a smile, a somewhat sinister look in his eyes before turning to block the only exit, the lift door, I remembered that some residents in the neighbourhood had been robbed recently and the culprit was still at large. I was nervous, but somehow i managed to convince myself that he was just another resident getting home. As the lift door closed, the man reached inside his pockets… I was nervous 5mins ago, now, I'm scared....

Scenario 3

I was returning from recess and found out that my new Nike bag had a pen mark. I was given this bag as a reward for doing well for PSLE from my parents.''Losing today's soccer game and now this!'' I mumbled with a sense of irritation. As I reached into my bag for tissue paper to try to wipe off the irritating pen mark, my hands suddenly felt something slimy. Someone had cracked two eggs in my bag and your books were ruined. I was now getting very annoyed after the series of bad happenings. Just as I was about to run off to find your form teacher, my best friend informed me that my pencil case had been found in the dustbin, cut to shreds.''Oh come on! did you have to tell me that after all that happened?'' I said to him furiously.

Glenn Tan (39)

Thursday, January 21, 2010

Scenario Writing

In your English lessons, you have learnt how to create interesting characters using the technique "Show vs Tell". You have also learnt that words may have the same theme, for example: piqued, irritated, irate, livid, etc., but they have different grades of meaning.

Using what you have learnt about writing thus far, choose two out of three of the following scenarios and write one paragraph each. In your writing, you must SHOW the emotions stated in the brackets.

Scenario 1 (Fear)
It was late at night and you were entering the lift. A man walked in swiftly after you. He smiled at you, a somewhat sinister look in his eyes before turning to block the only exit. You remembered that some residents in the neighbourhood had been robbed recently and the culprit was still at large. As the lift door closed, the man reached inside his pockets…

Scenario 2 (Fear/Anger)
You were hiking with your best friend when you came across a dilapidated hut. You had passed by this hut many times and it had been abandoned for years. However, today, there seemed to be activity inside and you could hear intermittent cries coming from inside the hut.

Scenario 3 (Anger)
You returned from recess and found that your new Nike bag had a pen mark. You were given this bag as a reward for doing well for PSLE. As you reached into your bag to look for tissue paper, your hands felt something slimy. Someone had cracked two eggs in your bag and your books were ruined. Just as you were about to run off to find your form teacher, your best friend informed you that your pencil case had been found in the dustbin, cut to shreds.